May
22
The box fort
Jerry the raccoon has a box fort but not just any old box fort its in the sky. He lives in his box fort with Angelica and Mike his mum and dad. Every day they embarrass him saying he was naughty at school.
“come here” yells Jerry
sitting lazily in her chair she say’s ” i’ll be right there”
Jerry’s always wanting Angelica to check his homework’ he’s in year 6. and he’s always in a different room this box fort is so big each person has about 4 bedrooms at least. A leaf truck went by we missed it’s the ice cream truck but its a leaf.
Hi Mia,
A box fort, what a fantastic idea, I am still imagining what a box fort looks like! I love the idea of the fort being so big it can accommodate four bedrooms at least.
I look forward to your next piece.
🙂
Hi Mia,
Interesting use of the prompt words this week. I can just picture a little raccoon in a box fort. Next time be careful with your punctuation and capital letters to start sentences.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Horan
Team 100WC
Morrinsville, New Zealand