November 27

The Doctors Office

John green was a 27 year old man and he felt really ill a lot of the time. John made sure he had his medicine every morning and every night. He slept at the hospital every Monday, Wednesday and Saturday which meant he had to be checked every hour. On Monday the doctor he has is Julianne mungo. On Wednesday his doctors name is will rind. Saturday is different john goes to the doctors office and lays an the bed and sleeps all day and all night. He reduces his illness by talking with the doctors about all of his problems.

November 22

The Beach

It’s john’s birthday today and he requested to go to the can you guess the beach. John decided to build a sandcastle the sand here is white so I’m going to call it crafty white castle. First he piled up a small hill of sand then flattened the sides. Then he covered it with leaves then he found a digger berried beneath the sand he picked it up and rolled it along the sand. John made a mote around the castle and filled up his bucket with  water then ran back and dumped the water in the mote. Happy birthday.

November 22

The Worlds Worst Children Brian Wong

Brian Wong was never ever wrong and his favorite subject was mathematics. His teacher said you can’t count to infinity but Wong said “i can” so he started counting and he kept on going and going. and then he lost count and he started again. People gathered to watch him count they called him counting boy and then counting man. He got older and older he kept counting still. He got to 111 years old and still counting. He got to infinity but couldn’t prove it because he died with a smile on his face. In this text I found dialogue to show he was talking.

November 1

Her Brother

Exhausted and breathing hard she simply raised her fists, all her brother could do was run or sprint. So he sprinted down the corridor past his mother out the back door over the fence and into the neighbors treehouse. Now all he could think about was a plan a clever plan was the best type of plan. He got down from the treehouse and behind a bush in the dirt lay a plan a very clever plan. indeed he knew what it said but no-one else would. His plan was cheeky and distracting now his revenge was better than ever his plan had already begun, his intelligents. The End

November 1

The Worlds Worst Children Bertha The Blubberer

bertha was eight years old and sobbed for everything. she would always dob on her brother saying he did it when actually she did it. Then one day she dobbed on her brother and he got no pudding for a month  then another time she pulled all of her hair out and blamed it on her brother again and then she got no pudding for a month because he parents saw her doing it. in this part of the book I found a writing technic and it was a simile.

October 25

The Skate park

“Dad can I go to the skate park” said albert

“sure” said Jon his dad.

so albert set of on his scooter to the skate park. When he got there there was nothing there but 2 diggers and a dump truck. All he could think about was the skate park concrete turning pink and fluffy with a red dancing giraffe printed on the quarter pipe. Well his imagination could run as wild as a grizzly bear but that’s just his imagination not real life. Real life is way more boring than your imagination lay down and let your imagination run wild.

 

 

October 25

The Worlds Worst Children

Today I read the worlds worst children the first chapter dribbling drew. dribbling drew loved to sleep he would sleep all day and all night. somedays he would  get wheeled in his bed to school . but one day when his class went on an excursion to the museum he snuck away to sleep and then when he was still asleep they locked up the museum then his drool flooded the museum and became a tidal wave when the security guard opened the doors to the museum. A writing technic I found in this book was listing what the picture showed.

October 25

MY BIRTHDAY

On the 22 01 2020 it was my birthday

“today is going to be so fun” I said  to my self still trying to get out of bed. I cant wait to open my presents there going to be so good. So I get myself out of bed get up and dance I run out and wake my parents up and say “can I open my presents now” all they say is “stop I’m tired go away” so i go sit on the couch and watch tv. “I’m so bored” finally my parents get out of bed and all they said was wait” but I had to see what was inside. 

 

September 25

what for

On the first day of holidays I got an invite to a show all it said was come join us at the show 12:00 I thought that it would be the time that I went. So I set off that evening not knowing were I was going but I figured it out. They asked me yes or no but I didn’t know what for so I said yes they looked like nice people. Then they said your joining the human cannon ball team I hated fling in the air so I said I will throw up they said fine throw up.